This is a very well written story. Way softer than I expected, but very very nice. I liked reading it. I didn’t expect that the brother and sister are REALLY helping each other. But they did and that touched my heart. In the end the “hero” is still in a very humiliating position and depending o the mothers reaction can end in a … “usual way” >> Diapered by his mother because of his behavior… . But we don’t know because it is an open end. I REALLY LIKE IT! Thank you for writing it.
Thank you! Despite what you've said, whenever I read a paragraph back I always cringe XD Still, thanks!
And yeah, the brother-sister dynamic is interesting. I'm not sure how much of a role it'll play in future, as I'm bringing in some new characters for the sequel, but we'll see.
Haha, if there is one thing I do not like, its parents getting too involved. Family, generally, isn't fun for me, but it was an appropriate way to begin the story. In hindsight, it would have worked better as a best friend, although the living together thing would have been difficult.
Reading this story a second time was a great experience! I loved the edits you made, changing the meetup location from the girlfriend's house to the public bathroom was a good choice.
I keep wondering what happens to Niki after this, leaving it on a cliff-hanger like that is well-done though.
Ah, so excited to see this back! My favorite story of yours, I was devastated when I tried to grab it on Deviantart and it was missing! Even better with the recent edits. Can't wait to see more from you, I've been thoroughly enjoying your new work. Wish there were more unwilling boys involved, though. ;)
This is a very well written story. Way softer than I expected, but very very nice. I liked reading it. I didn’t expect that the brother and sister are REALLY helping each other. But they did and that touched my heart.
ReplyDeleteIn the end the “hero” is still in a very humiliating position and depending o the mothers reaction can end in a … “usual way” >> Diapered by his mother because of his behavior… .
But we don’t know because it is an open end.
I REALLY LIKE IT!
Thank you for writing it.
Thank you! Despite what you've said, whenever I read a paragraph back I always cringe XD Still, thanks!
DeleteAnd yeah, the brother-sister dynamic is interesting. I'm not sure how much of a role it'll play in future, as I'm bringing in some new characters for the sequel, but we'll see.
Haha, if there is one thing I do not like, its parents getting too involved. Family, generally, isn't fun for me, but it was an appropriate way to begin the story. In hindsight, it would have worked better as a best friend, although the living together thing would have been difficult.
Thanks again, anyway!
*giggles* That was a good ride :) Almost made it!
ReplyDeleteHaha thanks! Yeah, he's always inches away from freedom, but never gets there!
DeleteGlad to see you edited and re-posted another of your old gems! Thanks a lot for bringing back your "lost" material!
ReplyDeleteThanks! For reading the original as well!
DeleteReading this story a second time was a great experience! I loved the edits you made, changing the meetup location from the girlfriend's house to the public bathroom was a good choice.
ReplyDeleteI keep wondering what happens to Niki after this, leaving it on a cliff-hanger like that is well-done though.
-Ami
Thank you! Glad to hear my refactoring was appreciated!
DeleteI'll try not to keep you waiting for long! It *should* be good!
Does that mean...a sequel?!? :D
Delete-Ami
It might ;)
DeleteAh, so excited to see this back! My favorite story of yours, I was devastated when I tried to grab it on Deviantart and it was missing! Even better with the recent edits. Can't wait to see more from you, I've been thoroughly enjoying your new work. Wish there were more unwilling boys involved, though. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks! Really appreciate it!
DeleteHaha, possibly in future :)
Can you add a link to your deviantart-Site, please.
ReplyDeleteSure. I'll add it to the footer.
DeleteSo glad you posted this one on here, really like this story! Any other long stories in the pipeline, maybe...?
ReplyDeleteThank you! A few, yes :)
DeleteLove this story so much, you're such a good writer... :)
ReplyDeleteI love this story! My absolute favorite of all time! Any possibility of a sequel some time in the future?
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