Monday 24 March 2014

The Highchair Incident

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9 comments:

  1. Great story, I'm glad you decided to re-visit it and hope there's still more where that came from!

    Thanks a lot!

    Cheers.

    -punkboy (having trouble posting with "Name/URL", again, so anonymous it is...)

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  2. That was pretty fantastic, though I do regret that the setup didn't lead to being caught, but alas. It was still fun.

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    1. Thank you! Yeah, I considered the idea of Katie finding her like that, but I didn't know how I was going to play that out. Don't worry, it'll happen a LOT in future!

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  3. Aww, thanks so much for posting this! Love the changes to the ending, by the way. Very alluring.

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    1. Thank you! For reading the original as well!

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  4. Really like this story, are the others from your deviantart account going up here? :)

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    1. Thanks! And yep, eventually... They all really need polish, but soon!

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  5. So fantastic :)

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